Ok, so here is my contribution to the Superman jam. Hope you like it. If not hate on it as much as you like, ha.
-Justin.
Saturday, June 16, 2007
Better Late Than Never!!!
Ok, so here is my contribution to the Superman jam. Hope you like it. If not hate on it as much as you like, ha.
-Justin.
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4 comments:
yeah man, i really like this, great pose and solid colors (love the classic powder blue suit). I don't like the border tho, the sky is great but the orange doubled border could easily be taken out, you don't need it in my opinion.
Nice job Coffee! Love that blue!
i dunno...i kinda dig the border
it works with the graphic feel of the background and it helps supes pop more
my suggestion would be to take in the 2nd border so it isn't as far from the other one.
close that white space in between the borders a little you know
other than that i dig it
great job!
To me, the reason why the border is calling some attention is that it's making a bright white shape with strong, sharp intersecting lines. I think if you removed the outside border, the white shape it creates would disappear, and you could still have the frame concept because of the first border. The clouds in the bg don't seem to be creating a problem because they have a softer edge and more organic shape. What do you think?
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